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Jennifer James's avatar

I'm really enjoying this format. Moving back and forth from present to flashbacks gives the feeling that the reader is zeroing in on the story's climax.

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Blake Allan's avatar

For me, a big part of the format is that it also allows me to focus on character development—each is getting a chapter with some further insight into who they are, and hopefully gets readers to feel more invested in themthem.

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Jennifer James's avatar

It's working.

I've always preferred the process of character development to world building.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

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